Ehhh
Just, where's that buildup in the first drop?
Also that drop is quite messy, make the bass way lower and make the kicks and snares louder.
Same with the second and third drop, just remove those annoying buzz and laser sounds.
The extra buzz sound at 2:24 doesn't fit at all.
At least make the buildups different from each other.
Also the repetition kills me.
1 Star, you tried.