I just consider this to be "eh"
The animation is really choppy because there aren't enough frames per second to make it smooth, which is basically a key part of animation, I'd reccommend to go for at least 30FPS.
Also, this is confusing as hell ;3;
Oh, also, the camera zooms aren't eased, so it looks more choppy than a usual animation.
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Conclusion: You've got the sprites and everything, but you need to be less lazy to animate and you even admitted tha- I mean use more frames per second and ease the movements of the camera. 6/10, 3/5. ~CyroNG/Oonir